We prepare incisive and constructive critiques

[Frederic Madre]

Our critiques include plot and character analysis, timeline checking, comment ondescriptive sequences, dialogue and narrative and an overall opinion on the manuscript balance. 

                                      We will suggest how you could improve weak areas of the text, tighten dialogue, build depth for characters and create better descriptive passages. The critique will 
include our opinion on the strengths and weaknesses of the text, and the realistic chances of selling the script to a mainstream publisher or production company.

                                      Working with the writer we can revise the manuscript to include updated information, add new characters, scenes or scenarios. We rise to the challenge of inserting a new sub-plot into fiction manuscripts, enhancing the tale and adding exciting new twists and turns to pedestrian stories.

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